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12:14 Jul 13, 2011 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Science - Physics | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Michael Powers (PhD) United States Local time: 10:14 | ||||||
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4 +6 | Yes, it is correct |
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4 +4 | Grammatically correct, except redundant "the" and awkward syntatically |
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Grammatically correct, except redundant "the" and awkward syntatically Explanation: Grammatically it is correct; however, it is more common to start with the subject. In this case, that would be the following: The heavyweights, protons and neutrons in the nucleus manage to make up more than 99.9 percent of an atom’s mass while occupying only a trillionth of its volume. Mike |
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