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Could somebody help me with editing of the extract of this presentation? it seems to me it would be better to separate 1 sentence into 2 ones.
Взаимодействие и быстрота операционных действий позволяет абсолютно прозрачно и «безболезненно» получать, передавать и расширять ассортимент продукции с доставкой на места выдачи товаров или на домашний адрес
Interaction and speed of operational actions allows you to clearly, transparently and painlessly transfer, receive, expand the range of products with delivery, both to the points of delivery and to a personal address.
Could somebody help me with editing of the extract of this presentation? it seems to me it would be better to separate 1 sentence into 2 ones.
Взаимодействие и быстрота операционных действий позволяет абсолютно прозрачно и «безболезненно» получать, передавать и расширять ассортимент продукции с доставкой на места выдачи товаров или на домашний адрес
Interaction and speed of operational actions allows you to clearly, transparently and painlessly transfer, receive, expand the range of products with delivery, both to the points of delivery and to a personal address.
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Pavel Altukhov
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Vladyslav Golovaty
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12 mins
Pavel Altukhov
Native in Russian
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Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, French to Russian, and 6 more.
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Liaison and prompt operation provide for totally transparent and trouble-free receipt and transfer of products, and expansion of the product range, as well as delivery to the pick-up points or to the doorstep.
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10 mins
Vladyslav Golovaty
Ukraine
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Ukraine
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Native in: English (Variant: US) 
, Ukrainian (Variant: Standard-Ukraine) , Russian
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The interaction and speed of operations allow us to receive, transfer and expand the range of products in a totally transparent and “headache-free” manner at the delivery outlets of goods or at a residential address
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Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
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