Feb 9, 2015 10:05
9 yrs ago
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English term

both...but also

Non-PRO English Art/Literary General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters General
In this video made by a native speaker (http://www.ieltsspeaking.co.uk/expressing-personal-opinions/... there is a sentence:

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The government should set regulations both for the individuals but also companies and industry.
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Is this "both...but also" collocation correct? And, should it be industries instead of industry? Thanks.

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both/and or not only/but also

This is a mishmash - while it would be understood in colloquial speech it isn't strictly correct. You can say "both for the individuals and for xxx" or "not only for the individuals but also for xxx".

You also need to watch the positioning of "both" - strictly speaking it is either "for both x and y" or "both for x and for y" (although a lot of people ignore this)

"industry" as a collective term for "the industrial sector" is absolutely fine.
Peer comment(s):

agree Victoria Britten
20 mins
agree Phong Le
27 mins
agree Peter Simon
2 hrs
agree Veronika McLaren
2 hrs
agree B D Finch
2 hrs
agree British Diana : However, in everyday speech you hear it all the time.
4 hrs
agree acetran
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neutral Yvonne Gallagher : I always consider "both" to be for two things, not for three as here. Otherwise agree and yes, "industry is collective term and fine.//So you see "companies and industry" as 1 item? I'd still avoid "both" and use your "not only..." option.
5 hrs
I see "companies/industry" as being grouped together as a term for anything corporate, so I don't see that as a problem here.
agree JaneTranslates : Let's hear it for the champions of parallel structure! I'm a fan of correlative conjunctions, but have been called a "zombie" for it.
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