Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Indonesian term or phrase:
sedap dipandang mata
English translation:
makes your skin look gorgeous
Indonesian term
sedap dipandang mata
5 | makes your skin look gorgeous | diana_d |
4 +1 | pleasing to the eye | Eddie R. Notowidigdo |
3 | lovely to look at | Catherine Muir |
3 | nice to see | Ahmad Ridwan Munib |
Proposed translations
makes your skin look gorgeous
All it needs is a bit of powder on top for a bit of extra coverage and it actually makes your skin look gorgeous.
http://beautytips.beautymania.biz/2011/07/tips-on-how-to-make-your-skin-gorgeous.html
http://mothercitymom.com/2013/03/02/east-meets-west-bb-cream-face-off/#more-1489
lovely to look at
Pakai blus model baru supaya kamu sedap dipandang. Please wear a blouse of new fashion so that you are pleasant to look at.
Discussion
skin lovely to look at - 10.100 hits
skin pleasing to the eye - 1.360 hits
Varian (contoh saja):
skin look lovely - 77.500 hits
skin look exquisite - 21.100 hits.
Sekarang, berpulang ke iklannya. Apakah ingin memakai bahasa tersering terdengar (agar cepat nyambung dengan pelanggan) ataukah ingin keluar pakem (agar lebih berkesan beda/istimewa)? Atau di tengah-tengah (tidak terlalu banyak digunakan tetapi juga tidak unik-unik amat)?