English to Italian Other Religion Sermon

On the day their dance is rejected in the first **round** of reviews, Xxxx doesn’t eat his lunch, and he only reluctantly eats a little at dinner. Do you(pl) think he’s able to sleep that night? (He can’t sleep.) He can’t sleep again, his mind is churning, “Why don’t things work out anywhere I go? God has not blessed me. The dance we’ve been working on for two months didn’t pass the first **round** of reviews. I don’t know when it’ll pass the second **round** of reviews, and I don’t know how much time we’ll have to spend for that to happen.