May 4, 2016 12:25
8 yrs ago
English term

impact at its heart

English to Chinese Marketing Marketing This sentence is describing a conference
For our 69th, we continue the story with transformation and impact at its heart – prepare to be #WOWed in New Orleans!

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见下

很抱歉,由于草率,我给出的第一个解答并不正确。在jyuan 兄的启发下,我做了进一步的思考,认为现在已经得到了正解,分享如下。

这里 at its heart 应该这样读:with (transformation and impact) at its heart, 也就是 with something at its heart 的结构,其中 transformation and impact 应该放在一起来读。 its heart 就是 the conference's heart。

整句话的翻译是说:

对于我们的第 69 届大会,我们将把转型和影响力作为其重心来继续这个故事 — 准备好在新奥尔良一鸣惊人(迎接欢呼)吧!

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Note added at 1 day3 hrs (2016-05-05 15:58:54 GMT)
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我觉得,we continue the story with transformation and impact at its heart 可以写成 we continue the story by placing transformation and impact at its heart。

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Note added at 1 day3 hrs (2016-05-05 16:02:04 GMT)
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也就是说,with (transformation and impact) at its heart 这个整体作为状语,修饰 we continue the story。
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2 hrs

本质影响/根本影响

在第69集(回)里,我们将继续讲述这个关于转变和本质影响的故事 — 做好在新奥尔良被震撼的准备吧!

根据上下文内容,transformation 或许可以翻成(转型/变化),impact 或许可以翻成(冲击)。
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12 hrs

FYI

For our 69th, we continue the story with transformation and impact at its heart – prepare to be #WOWed in New Orleans!

对于我们的第 69 届世界大会,从本质上来说,我们将以转型和影响(或”转型及其影响“,原文模棱两可)的主题来接续这个故事 — 准备好在新奥尔良博得和喝彩吧!

at its heart 修饰全句而非 impact;its的主体是STORY而不是IMPACT
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Thanks! Agreed with you that 'at its heart' 修饰全句而非 'impact'. After reviewing the context more thoroughly, I believed 'its' refers to 'our 69th congress'.
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1 day 7 hrs

實質而言

我們這個第 69屆大會,實質而言是繼續講這轉型和具影響的故事 — 這將會是在新奧爾良令人目瞪口呆的盛事!

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