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Jan 21, 2016 12:26
8 yrs ago
English term
crafted beauty
English to French
Marketing
Marketing / Market Research
the doucment is a marketing one, for a company selling alcohol, and the segmenet below is (in a way) their motto. I'm trying to find something concise.
Enchant with crafted beauty
Un ebeauté artisanale ensorcelante?????
Isn't it too far from the text?
Enchant with crafted beauty
Un ebeauté artisanale ensorcelante?????
Isn't it too far from the text?
Proposed translations
(French)
| 4 | Une beauté raffinée |
Thierry Bonhomme
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| 3 | une beauté sophistiquée |
Cécile Gaultier
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Proposed translations
15 mins
Une beauté raffinée
Still, I think such a motto should be dealt with as a whole phrase, i.e. "Enchant with crafted beauty" which could be rendered with a terser phrase like "Le plaisir du raffinement" or "Le goût du raffinement" which would have more impact.
Note from asker:
| thus you totally leave out the word "enchant". I also think the term "crafted" implies something that is not in your translation. but you're right, your translation is concise and has more impact. |
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Cécile Gaultier
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une beauté sophistiquée
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