French term
United Kingdom
mieux structurer ses instances
Here is the full sentence:
Depuis 2011, la Fédération Française de Football a mis en place un Plan fédéral de féminisation, devenu un axe prioritaire de la politique fédérale, dont l’ambition est non seulement d’améliorer la place des femmes dans le football mais aussi de mieux structurer ses instances.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks a lot,
Alexander
| 4 +5 | improve the structure of its governing bodies |
Jane Phillips
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| 5 +1 | to streamline its governing bodies |
Francois Boye
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| 4 +1 | to structure its bodies/authorities/agencies better |
Maria Constant (X)
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Dec 2, 2014 12:28: writeaway changed "Field" from "Social Sciences" to "Bus/Financial"
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Proposed translations
improve the structure of its governing bodies
to structure its bodies/authorities/agencies better
| agree |
writeaway
: bodies. (love whose goal. Maybe objective?) repeating the verb improve makes it flow better.
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Thanks writeaway.
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United States
An economic geek with social skills
Native in: French 
Works in: English to French, French to English, Spanish to English, and 1 more.
to streamline its governing bodies
| agree |
philgoddard
: I don't disagree with the previous two suggestions, but this is more... streamlined.
3 mins
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| neutral |
writeaway
: if that's how they plan to improve.....
10 mins
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| neutral |
B D Finch
: I think "to streamline" is an over-translation.
17 mins
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