Jul 11, 2013 13:22
10 yrs ago
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Polish term

Na wesele przybywajcie o prezenty sie nie martwcie,

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Na wesele przybywajcie o prezenty sie nie martwcie,
By nie skladac ich na stercie niechaj zmieszcza sie w kopercie.

Zaproszenie na slub/wesele

Zamagam sie...rymowanka niekonieczna, ale jak to oddac sense tej prosby...
Bede wdzieczna za wszelkie sugestie

Discussion

Dawid Mazela, MA, MCIL Jul 11, 2013:
@possum Na wyspach to też znany fenomen (patrz moja odpowiedź), a ocena czy niesmaczny pozostawiłbym w kwestii pary młodej ;)

possum (asker) Jul 11, 2013:
Zgadam sie z Dariuszem, ale wlasnie z pomyslem na te zabawna formulke mam problem :)
George BuLah (X) Jul 11, 2013:
sakiewka zamiast koperty...E, ale i tak głupawe ;) Join our wedding happy/happiest day,
drop the presents right away
Don't you put them on the couch,
[...'d] better - feed with cash our/the pouch
George BuLah (X) Jul 11, 2013:
Trochę zgadzam się z Dariuszem, bo zadaniem naszego pokolenia nie jest odbrązawianie i krzewienie przywar, ale z drugiej strony - nasz klient nasz pan;
sugeruję uczynić adnotację:
- tekst pochodzi z XIV wieku
albo
- tekst pochodzi z terenów zaboru rosyjskiego; wraz z odzyskaniem niepodległości - nie pojawia się
;-)

Proposed translations

+2
5 hrs
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[nieco niżej]

Explanation:
można tłumaczyć, ale z racji tego, że chodzi tylko o główny przekaz ($$$) i o jako takie wrażenia estetyczne proponuję coś, co sam kiedyś dostałem:

We haven't got a gift list, for all of you to see,
Because as you all know we never can agree!
But if you'd like to help us, start our married life,
cash or high street vouchers, would save a lot of strife.
Peer comment(s):

agree Jadwiga Wos : Wow, to jest super! i delikatnie powiedziane :-)
2 hrs
agree Beata Claridge : w linku znajdziesz inne rymowanki, ale ta jest IMO najblizsza orginalnemu przekazowi http://www.youandyourwedding.co.uk/forum/i-got-married-in-20...
6 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Piekne dzieki za odpowiedz i inspiracje :)"
+3
45 mins

[niżej]

Let's enjoy our wedding together, we're not planning to elope,
don't worry about stacking the presents, wrap them up in an envelope.

radosna 'tfurczość', może się nada ;)
Peer comment(s):

agree Magdalena Psiuk : Jeśli wyrzuci się 'together' i 'stacking', będzie bardziej rytmicznie :)
32 mins
agree George BuLah (X) : no piENknie :) ... tylko z czego ta koperta i jak wielka (wrap THEM up, the PRESENTS ;) ... może dużo pomieści, ale już odkurzacz i komplet pościeli - będą wystawać z koperty :P:)
1 hr
agree Jadwiga Wos : No, i jednak dalo sie w miare zgrabnie. Tez najpierw mnie zaskoczylo, jak Dariusza, ale jak klient tak sobie zyczy...
3 hrs
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+1
4 hrs

[jeszcze niżej]

sakiewka zamiast koperty...

Join our wedding happiest day,
drop the presents right away
Don't you put them on the couch,
[...'d] better - feed with cash the pouch

albo

Join our wedding happy day,
drop the presents right away
Don't you put them on the couch,
[...'d] better - feed with cash our pouch
Peer comment(s):

agree Jadwiga Wos : Super! A ostatnia linijka moze: Better yet, "feed our pouch", wtedy kwestia "cash" zostanie dyskretnie pominieta :-).
3 hrs
You Super, Madam :) ... be my Calliope! :)
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9 hrs

decorate our wedding money-tree / drop a coin into our wedding wishing-well

To save you looking,
shopping and buying,
Here is an idea
we hope you'll like trying!

Come to our wedding
to wish us both well,
And make some use
of our little wishing well.

Just put some money into a card,
Now make a wish....
See, that wasn't hard!

Now that we have saved you all of the fuss,
We hope that you will come
And celebrate with us!

Submitted by Lisa

http://www.i-do.com.au/wedding-tips/bridal-registries-bridal...
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Reference comments

9 hrs
Reference:

So what do you get
For the Bride and Groom
Whose house needs things
In every room?

When shopping for a present
Please, don’t be rash
As the option is there
To just give cash!


We hope that you don’t find
Our request to be funny
But the decision is yours
To buy a present, or give money

Now you have the choice
Please do not fuss
The most important thing of all
Is that you come celebrate with us!

Submitted by Cindy Fuller

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They have their dishes and towels for two,
They have pots and pans and oven mitts too.
So what do you get for the bride & groom
whose house is setup in every room?

Their house needs repairs and some upgrades too,
But you can not register for carpet and glue.
A tree that grows wishes is the way to go,
so lets make it easy for all that know.

An envelope will be provided for those who have room,
To give a monetary wish to the bride and groom.
A money tree will be on display at the reception hall
to attach your wishes, for the couple, with love from all.


Submitted by Belinda Blackburn

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Our home is quite complete now,
we've been together long.
So please consider our request,
and do not take us wrong.

A delicate request it is,
we hope you understand.
Please play along, as it will give
our married life a hand.

The tradition of the wishing well,
is one that's known by all.
Go to the well, toss in a coin
and as the coin does fall.

Make a wish upon that coin,
and careful as you do.
Cause as the well's tradition goes,
your wishes will come true.

So on this special day or ours,
the day that we'll be wed.
Don't hunt for special gifts
but give money is it's stead.


And as you drop the envelope,
with money great and small,
Remember, make your wish
as you watch your money fall.

Submitted by Lisa & Daryl Stack

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Note from asker:
Dziekuje za pomoc i sugestie :)
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