Apr 11, 2013 05:23
11 yrs ago
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German term

"ein Mann der leisen aber klaren Töne"

German to English Bus/Financial Management Communication style
Referring to the communication style of a manager. I don't think this is about how loudly he speaks but more about him being a plain speaker/forthright speaker who doesn't raise his voice to get his way.
A plain yet reflective speaker? A man who speaks his mind plainly yet reflectively? Am I on the right track here?

Discussion

oa_xxx (X) Apr 11, 2013:
depending on your text, you could I spose also write something like, a man who can get his message (or point) across without raising his voice or who can make himself heard quietly but firmly....!
Wendy Streitparth Apr 11, 2013:
@ Alexander: that would also be a possibility (soft-spoken and to the point).

Proposed translations

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German term (edited): der leisen aber klaren Töne
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soft-spoken but straightforward

That's how I understand it.
Peer comment(s):

agree Alexander Schleber (X) : I like this best. Short and to-the-point.
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agree Lindsay Condit Marshall
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agree MiriamT (X)
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agree Inna Edsall : I like this one most of all.
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agree David Williams
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German term (edited): \"ein Mann der leisen aber klaren Töne\"

a soft-spoken man of clear messages

translating leise Töne with soft-spoken is pretty obvious, and I think that clear messages rings nicely within a text about management styles.
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a softly spoken, no-nonsense kind of man

I just prefer softly spoken to soft spoken and wanted to offer an alternative for the "klaren Töne"
Peer comment(s):

neutral Cilian O'Tuama : Can a person be softly spoken? I wouldn't have thought so.
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agree David Williams : But "soft-spoken" rather than "softly spoken", cf. http://www.thefreedictionary.com/soft-spoken
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a man who exudes a low-key but firm demeanor.

Low-key demeanor i definitely up there on the list of appropriate communication and leadership styles

Example from link below:

"Anastasia Bottos, executive vice president of business development and acquisitions for Media, Pa.-based Alarm Capital Alliance, exudes a low-key demeanor."

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Here's another one - a little closer to the original. It should also be noted that English uses verb phrases more frequently whereas German prefers noun phrases:

"A man who communicates softly but with candor"
Peer comment(s):

agree Lancashireman : "A man who exudes a demeanour"? Michael, this takes sixth-hour interventions to a new level!
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Always one to explore new levels. I get bored with the run-of-the-mill stuff..
disagree Cilian O'Tuama : English as no one speaks it IMO
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Sure. You just keep on thinking that..
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2 days 21 hrs
German term (edited): \"ein Mann der leisen aber klaren Töne\"

a man who speaks with a soft, yet commanding voice

(unless "commanding" is over the top here).
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