Sep 25, 2012 09:13
11 yrs ago
Italian term
United Kingdom
Finance-legal specialist- Ivy League MBA
Native in: Italian 
, English
Works in: English to Italian, Italian to English, French to Italian, and 2 more.
apparati redazionali
Italian to English
Art/Literary
Journalism
description of activity carried out by a communication agency:
direzione giornalistica, ideazione contenuti e riunioni redazione, commissione lavori e loro controllo, scrittura in inglese di testi e apparati redazionali, passaggio redazionale caricamento in pagina, predisposizione Newsletter, attività su social network
not sure what this is
thanks!
direzione giornalistica, ideazione contenuti e riunioni redazione, commissione lavori e loro controllo, scrittura in inglese di testi e apparati redazionali, passaggio redazionale caricamento in pagina, predisposizione Newsletter, attività su social network
not sure what this is
thanks!
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 +2 | formatting & output style |
Michael Korovkin
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| 4 | stories |
Veronica Sardon
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| 4 | editing |
philgoddard
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| 3 | desk-top publishing apparatus |
tradu-grace
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Proposed translations
+2
21 hrs
Michael Korovkin
Italy
Italy
Native in English
Specializes in field
Italy
Native in: English , Russian
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, Italian to Russian, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
24
Selected
formatting & output style
"Output style editing"
their is a concept of "style" in terms of actual LOOK of the text: punctuation, indents and tabulation, foot/endnoting, fonts of the notes being different or the same of the main text, heading, page numbering and its location, etc.
I.e., in academic Formatting and Style, one may use a Michigan University Style Standard, or Harward University Style, ecc. There are many output styles, but it is important to be consistent in their use throughout the paper (students, for example, rarely are!)
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there
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and i often tell them "il vostro apparato redazionale mi fa ca....re!", or, in English, but colloquially, "your text styling sucks!"
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screw the points; glad to be of help :)
their is a concept of "style" in terms of actual LOOK of the text: punctuation, indents and tabulation, foot/endnoting, fonts of the notes being different or the same of the main text, heading, page numbering and its location, etc.
I.e., in academic Formatting and Style, one may use a Michigan University Style Standard, or Harward University Style, ecc. There are many output styles, but it is important to be consistent in their use throughout the paper (students, for example, rarely are!)
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there
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and i often tell them "il vostro apparato redazionale mi fa ca....re!", or, in English, but colloquially, "your text styling sucks!"
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Note added at 4 days (2012-09-29 17:55:08 GMT) Post-grading
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screw the points; glad to be of help :)
Note from asker:
| thanks! |
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Wolf Draeger
: Or style manual/guide
4 hrs
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Thanks, Wolf. But there are already the whole lot of well-established guides around: I think what they do is just take care of the styles, using the already extant systems.
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| agree |
tradu-grace
4 days
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thanks!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "ops I forgot to give you points!
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4 hrs
Veronica Sardon
Argentina
Argentina
Native in English
Works in field
Argentina
Bilingual internat. development expert
Native in: English , Spanish
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish to English, French to English, and 3 more.
stories
Apparato can be another word for text, and redazionale just means journalistic, so I would translate both your words with a single "stories," since you are already using "texts."
Note from asker:
| thanks Veronica |
5 hrs
philgoddard
United States
United States
Native in English
Specializes in field
United States
Six languages into flawless English
Native in: English
Works in: German to English, French to English, Spanish to English, and 4 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
16
editing
Thanks to Jim for his helpful reference.
As the asker points out, "editorial apparatus" does exist in English, but I'd never heard of it before today. It means things like typography, footnotes and bibliographies, but it's used entirely in academic circles, whereas this is a media agency we're talking about.
I would translate "scrittura in inglese di testi e apparati redazionali" as "English copywriting and editing".
As the asker points out, "editorial apparatus" does exist in English, but I'd never heard of it before today. It means things like typography, footnotes and bibliographies, but it's used entirely in academic circles, whereas this is a media agency we're talking about.
I would translate "scrittura in inglese di testi e apparati redazionali" as "English copywriting and editing".
Note from asker:
| thanks a lot Phil |
46 mins
tradu-grace
Italy
Italy
Native in Italian
Italy
15y in translation
Native in: Italian , French
Works in: English to Italian, French to Italian, Italian to English
Related KudoZ points
:
3
desk-top publishing apparatus
an option
http://www.google.com/patents/EP0240920A2?cl=en
Improvements in desk-top publishing apparatus
EP0240920 A2
ESTRATTO
A desk-top publishing apparatus in which an operator enters and manipulates different types of data objects such as typed text and line drawings. The apparatus is arranged to perform a method of managing the relationship between intermingled objects of different types for editing purposes. Management is through establishing separate and combined modes of operation. When a separate mode is selected, only a selected object will be affected by an edit action. When a combined mode is selected, selection of any object will result in all objects being affected by an edit action.
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@cristianac
However I've also find *editorial apparatus* explained in the following link:
http://www.jstor.org/discover/10.2307/40371549?uid=3738296&u...
Some principles for Editorial Apparatus
see if it fits better the whole context.
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@cristianac
Following my posted note on discussion, hereunder the link
explanation:
http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/search?q=cache:Y0BCxG-...
Ethos: the apparent moral quality, credibility, reliability of the speaker/writer
on the elements of the writing process (planning, inventing, arranging, drafting, revising, editing).
Style: diction and tone; clarity and propriety; variety and emphasis; prose rhythm; syntactic options (for expanding and reshaping sentences).
The above is just to give you another option. However, I stand my ground on *editorial apparatus/apparati*
Hope it may be of some help to you.
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@cristianac
my pleasure cristianac. You made a good choice by using Phil and Michael suggestions. Have a nice Sunday.
http://www.google.com/patents/EP0240920A2?cl=en
Improvements in desk-top publishing apparatus
EP0240920 A2
ESTRATTO
A desk-top publishing apparatus in which an operator enters and manipulates different types of data objects such as typed text and line drawings. The apparatus is arranged to perform a method of managing the relationship between intermingled objects of different types for editing purposes. Management is through establishing separate and combined modes of operation. When a separate mode is selected, only a selected object will be affected by an edit action. When a combined mode is selected, selection of any object will result in all objects being affected by an edit action.
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Note added at 53 min (2012-09-25 10:06:48 GMT)
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@cristianac
However I've also find *editorial apparatus* explained in the following link:
http://www.jstor.org/discover/10.2307/40371549?uid=3738296&u...
Some principles for Editorial Apparatus
see if it fits better the whole context.
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Note added at 1 giorno4 ore (2012-09-26 13:24:34 GMT)
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@cristianac
Following my posted note on discussion, hereunder the link
explanation:
http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/search?q=cache:Y0BCxG-...
Ethos: the apparent moral quality, credibility, reliability of the speaker/writer
on the elements of the writing process (planning, inventing, arranging, drafting, revising, editing).
Style: diction and tone; clarity and propriety; variety and emphasis; prose rhythm; syntactic options (for expanding and reshaping sentences).
The above is just to give you another option. However, I stand my ground on *editorial apparatus/apparati*
Hope it may be of some help to you.
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Note added at 5 giorni (2012-09-30 11:19:24 GMT) Post-grading
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@cristianac
my pleasure cristianac. You made a good choice by using Phil and Michael suggestions. Have a nice Sunday.
Note from asker:
| thanks tradugrace, the second fits perfectly. |
| special thanks for your research tradugrace |
Reference comments
7 mins
Reference:
Editorial display
Note from asker:
| thanks for the reference, although I am not sure this fits my context |
29 mins
James (Jim) Davis
Seychelles
Seychelles
Native in English
Seychelles
25 years experience constantly improving
Native in: English (Variant: British) 
Works in: Italian to English
Related KudoZ points
:
60
Reference:
No idea what to call it!
A partire dal dopoguerra il mondo accademico ha promosso convegni e studi sul tema della pubblicazione delle ricerche e del corredo di apparati redazionali. Tali apparati considerano principalmente:
· le note a pie’ pagina;
· la bibliografia;
· le modalità di trascrizione dei documenti e di citazione;
· l’uso delle interpunzioni particolari (a es., il trattino: - o –; le virgolette: inglesi “ ”, di citazione « », di inclusione < >);
· l’uso di effetto-carattere: corsivo, grassetto, maiuscolo, maiuscoletto;
· la produzione e l’alfabettizzazione degli indici.
http://www.upbeduca.it/normeredazionali.htm
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I had immediately thought of editing Phil, but then it doesn't seem to mean the key part of editing, deciding what should be cut and improving the text. One common usage is for the editorial staff and/or their activities.
· le note a pie’ pagina;
· la bibliografia;
· le modalità di trascrizione dei documenti e di citazione;
· l’uso delle interpunzioni particolari (a es., il trattino: - o –; le virgolette: inglesi “ ”, di citazione « », di inclusione < >);
· l’uso di effetto-carattere: corsivo, grassetto, maiuscolo, maiuscoletto;
· la produzione e l’alfabettizzazione degli indici.
http://www.upbeduca.it/normeredazionali.htm
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I had immediately thought of editing Phil, but then it doesn't seem to mean the key part of editing, deciding what should be cut and improving the text. One common usage is for the editorial staff and/or their activities.
Note from asker:
| thanks Jim, this is it. apparently Editorial Apparatus also exists in English |
Peer comments on this reference comment:
| agree |
philgoddard
: It means editing. Editorial apparatus does exist, but no one will know what it means.
3 hrs
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1 day 3 hrs
Discussion
in the end I used partly Michael's and partly of Phil's suggestions (the term occurred more than once in slightly different contexts)
sorry I cannot split points..
English copywriting and the elements of the writing process “editing, style and ethos” ?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Style_guide
Though I'm not sure how that would be worked into the translation, it's an odd phrase in IT.