Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran
English translation:
consumables for customer-purchased machines
Added to glossary by
James A. Walsh
Jun 29, 2011 17:04
12 yrs ago
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Spanish term
el consumo que hacen sus clientes
Spanish to English
Marketing
Advertising / Public Relations
Estudios de mercado.
El contexto quiere expresar que una parte importante del negocio (fotocopiadoras) de la compañía XXXX consiste en el servicio postventa. Es decir, la venta de consumibles a sus clientes, como consecuencia del uso de que hagan de los equipos que han adquirido a la compañía. En este contexto:
"XXXX nos comenta que una parte muy importante de su negocio es la postventa, es decir, el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran."
He reformulado un poco el párrafo, interpretando provisinalmente lo siguiente:
"XXXX tells us that a very important part of its business is after sales service, ie sell of consummables, goods used by their customers that must be supplied or replaced regularly."
"XXXX nos comenta que una parte muy importante de su negocio es la postventa, es decir, el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran."
He reformulado un poco el párrafo, interpretando provisinalmente lo siguiente:
"XXXX tells us that a very important part of its business is after sales service, ie sell of consummables, goods used by their customers that must be supplied or replaced regularly."
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Jul 1, 2011 22:02: James A. Walsh Created KOG entry
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Spanish term (edited):
el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran
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consumables for customer-purchased machines
This would be my handling of your sentence.
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Example sentence:
XXXX nos comenta que una parte muy importante de su negocio es la postventa, es decir, <u>el consumo que hacen sus clientes</u> de las máquinas que les compran.
XXXX have reported that a major part of its business is after-sales, i.e., <u>consumables for customer</u>-purchased machines.
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Peer comment(s):
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liz askew
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Thanks, Liz. And thanks for your help earlier today with the "Jurat Noble" translation.
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Consumption of
Otra opción, saludos!
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clients' usage volume/ volume of use
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2 Mar 2011 – I'm looking into purchasing a new photocopier for our office but am finiding it difficult to estimate what our copy volume will be and how ...
www.photocopierexperts.co.uk/qa-estimating-photocopier-usag... - En caché; Similarly, a copier intended for low volume use could not handle the task of a copier intended for a higher volume use, and be expected to last very long. ...
www.infinityoe.com/files/Copier Buyers Guide.pdf - Similares;Support and Contract Services - Cost Per Copy Copier Management ...
12 Oct 2010 – Monthly charges are collected and paid to the vendors based on the volume of copies made on each copier. Click here for monthly statements: ...
academicdepartments.musc.edu/.../copy.htm - Estados Unidos - En caché - Similares
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The consumption of services and supplies by machine buyers.
I feel that the Spanish is not very clearly written.
The original in Spanish may be interpreted as the consumption of machines by the clients:
"una parte muy importante de su negocio es la postventa, es decir, el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran"
Are the clients consuming the machines? I don't think so. I think the sentence really means something like this:
"The consumption of services and supplies by the buyers of the machines."
The original in Spanish may be interpreted as the consumption of machines by the clients:
"una parte muy importante de su negocio es la postventa, es decir, el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran"
Are the clients consuming the machines? I don't think so. I think the sentence really means something like this:
"The consumption of services and supplies by the buyers of the machines."
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the supplies his customers purchase
I agree that the original is awkward, but I think the idea would be most clearly expressed through something more like:
“XXX tells us that a very important part of his business is continuing sales—the supplies his customers purchase for the machines they buy from him."
“XXX tells us that a very important part of his business is continuing sales—the supplies his customers purchase for the machines they buy from him."
Discussion
"XXXX nos comenta que una parte muy importante de su negocio es la postventa, es decir, el consumo que hacen sus clientes de las máquinas que les compran."
Does it actually have another sentence after that refers to "..sell of consummables," and "that must be supplied or replaced regularly."?