Jun 25, 2009 23:43
14 yrs ago
Italian term
per le scale malcerte
Italian to English
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
I am not quite sure what is meant by "scale malcerte" here.
Ma più fresco l'odore
della donna incontrata, della breve avventura
per le scale malcerte.
Full poem by Pavese:
http://www.translatum.gr/forum/index.php/topic,45288.0.html
Ma più fresco l'odore
della donna incontrata, della breve avventura
per le scale malcerte.
Full poem by Pavese:
http://www.translatum.gr/forum/index.php/topic,45288.0.html
Proposed translations
(English)
3 +5 | on the rickety stairway | Sarah Weston |
3 | for the doubtful story | Hans Bruzja (X) |
3 | unstable stairs | Laura Dominicis |
Proposed translations
+5
6 mins
Selected
on the rickety stairway
how about this? "the woman he met on the rickety stairway"
Just an idea...
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Note added at 15 hrs (2009-06-26 15:06:17 GMT)
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I wouldn't fall into the trap of using anything as plainly stated as treacherous or doubtful, the fact on meeting someone on a stairway in itself already gives the idea of a fleeting moment and more still if the staircase is "rickety" and therefore impermanent.
Just an idea...
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Note added at 15 hrs (2009-06-26 15:06:17 GMT)
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I wouldn't fall into the trap of using anything as plainly stated as treacherous or doubtful, the fact on meeting someone on a stairway in itself already gives the idea of a fleeting moment and more still if the staircase is "rickety" and therefore impermanent.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
James (Jim) Davis
: Definitely. Only a young man can bear the weight of Pavese's melancholy. This is the way to start the morning: http://www.lyrics007.com/The Beatles Lyrics/Here Comes The S...
4 hrs
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Thanks Jim
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agree |
Tom in London
8 hrs
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Thanks Tom
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agree |
Maria Vita Licata
1 day 9 hrs
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Thanks Maria
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agree |
nimopaz
2 days 20 hrs
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Thanks nimopaz
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agree |
Armilla (X)
3 days 9 hrs
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Thanks Armilla
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
27 mins
for the doubtful story
maybe "per le scale malcerte" si just a metaphor and means that the story is doubtful with a girl met in that way, but im not sure cause i haven't read all the poem
12 days
unstable stairs
Non so se possa andar bene, mi piace però per il suono che si ripete "st".
Discussion
However , this would be my choice and you could pulle it off, since this is a poem, it gives you a little bit of space to "play" with creativity.