Glossary entry

French term or phrase:

"qu'il pourra face"/let if/love do its worst

English translation:

see this site with the translation

Added to glossary by liz askew
May 13, 2008 18:32
16 yrs ago
French term

"qu'il pourra face"

French to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature tranlsation of louise labe sonnet 3
Not sure on the meaning of this - the full stanza is:

"Qu'encor Amour su moy son arc essaie,
Que nouveaus feus me gette et nouveaus dars:
Qu'il se despite, et pis qu'il pourrace face:

Car je suis tant navree en toutes pars....

This is what I have so far:

"Will Love ever shoot me with its bow,
Do new flames and spears await me unknown?
Will it get angry, and then ??????

For I am so distressed in every bone....

All help much appreciated - this is for a final project in a doctoral class on Ital. trans.....(FYI)
Change log

May 20, 2008 19:15: liz askew Created KOG entry

Discussion

Liza Tripp (asker) May 13, 2008:
thanks liz... that's helpful. I've been working with the Annie Finch translation but this was a tough one and the English didn't really seem to point to the French....
Liza Tripp (asker) May 13, 2008:
also should be "pourra face" - sorry typo!
Liza Tripp (asker) May 13, 2008:
nope - 16th century french:) there is no italian, it is for a class in italian translation, but this project is french to english.
it is pure louise labe, but no accents - sorry US keyboard doesn't like to do that over the net....
Lany Chabot-Laroche May 13, 2008:
Where is that taken from? It seems a mix of bad French and ancien French. Also, what is the link with the Italian translation?

Proposed translations

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see this site with the translation

http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=4DOm1axf7TwC&pg=PA145&lpg...

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Note added at 25 mins (2008-05-13 18:58:06 GMT)
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O longs desirs, ô esperances vaines,
Tristes soupirs et larmes coutumieres
A engendrer de moy maintes rivieres,
Dont mes deus yeus sont sources et fontaines:

O cruautez, ô durtez inhumaines,
Piteus regars des celestes lumieres:
Du coeur transi ô passions premieres,
Estimez vous croitre encore mes peines?

Qu'encor Amour su moy son arc essaie
Que nouveaus feus me gette et nouveaus dars:
Qu'il se despite, et pis qu'il pourra face:

Car je suis tant navree en toutes pars,
Que plus en moy une nouvelle plaie,
Pour m'empirer ne pourroit trouver place.

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Note added at 25 mins (2008-05-13 18:58:25 GMT)
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I am still looking. The refs may be irrelevant, but it helps me!

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Note added at 28 mins (2008-05-13 19:00:32 GMT)
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Hi,

I have found the modern French equivalent to your verse ending in "pis qu'il pourra face"
Qu'Amour essaie encore son arc sur moi,
qu'il me jette de nouveaux feux et de nouvelles flèches,
qu'il se fâche, et qu'il fasse le pire qu'il pourra :

Let him get angry and let him do his worst


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Note added at 28 mins (2008-05-13 19:01:01 GMT)
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..

sorry

let love get angry and let love do its worst




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Note added at 29 mins (2008-05-13 19:01:31 GMT)
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Here is the site where you have four verses in modern day French!

http://216.239.59.104/search?q=cache:wWFj0KnhIxUJ:www2.ac-ly...

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Note added at 32 mins (2008-05-13 19:05:19 GMT)
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SONNET 3 by Louise Labé

Long-felt desires, hopes as long as vain—
sad sighs—slow tears accustomed to run sad
into as many rivers as two eyes can add,
pouring like fountains, endless as the rain—
cruelty beyond humanity, a pain
so hard it makes compassionate stars go mad
with pity: these are the first passions I’ve had.
Do you think love could root in my soul again?
If it arched the great bow back again at me,
licked me again with fire, and stabbed me deep
with the violent worst, as awful as before,
the wounds that cut me everywhere would keep
me shielded, so there would be no place free
for love. It covers me. It will pierce no more.


[First published in the Norton Anthology of World Poetry, 2000]

CLICK LINK BELOW FOR MORE POEMS:
More Poems by Labé

Copyright ©2000 by Annie Finch
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
37 mins

tous le vers: qu'il fasse le pire dont il est capable

As far as I remember from old french classes, 'face' is just exactly equivalent to 'fasse', so that would me more or less the desired translation. But of course it's up to you to arrange it somehow better to fit the poem frames:)

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well, you know that a damn good part of French language actually IS latin. Can't help it:)
Note from asker:
right - i was confused because there were two conjucated verbs together - that's why i thought "face" might not be "fasse" . I guess maybe it is a more latinate structure?
this is true(:
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5 hrs

who can face it

face sometimes is similar to face in english, as in to confront something
Peer comment(s):

disagree Susan Nicholls : as in "faire face", but not in this context
8 hrs
no, more like as in en face de
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