Sep 24, 2007 14:27
16 yrs ago
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Chinese term

个人情绪色彩

Chinese to English Social Sciences Human Resources
As in "有时候,我的反馈带有个人的情绪色彩"

My first thought has been "Sometimes my feedback is emotional in tone/has an emotion coloration."

Just feel something is still missing in conveying the meaning of "个人情绪色彩"

Thanks a lot !

Proposed translations

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6 hrs
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tinted with personal sentiments

"个人情绪色彩" 譯作 tinted with personal sentiments,這樣什麼也有了。
Peer comment(s):

disagree Jeff Pan : 这个过于书卷气, 补充:看到后面又有不太理解为什么反对,就再解释一下。译句不是看上去越fancy越好。pkchan的译句固然花了心思,很雅致,但不像现代人的普通说话方式,又不是17世纪英国上流社会贵族的社交用语,干嘛那么咬文嚼字的。还是贴近说话人的身份,语境译出为好。也是“信”的另一层含义。另外,"同意“,"反对”只针对译文,并不带“个人情绪色彩”,不必take it personally.
6 hrs
這又有何不妥呢,無书卷气才成問題
agree jyuan_us : I wish I could agree twice on this.
8 hrs
謝謝
agree FourSeasons : Don't know what's wrong with eagle004, but this translation is IMO absolutely brilliant.
10 hrs
衷心感謝,有時真的無話可說,花了心力,不求認同,但求不要有人反對
agree LoyalTrans : 我觉得不错。。。
2 days 5 hrs
衷心感謝
agree Jason Ma : I couldn't agree with you more. Eloquence and smoothness are equally important, IMHO.
2 days 16 hrs
衷心感謝
neutral Malcolm Mayfield : "tinted"?
6 days
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
11 mins

influenced by personal relevance or sentiments

I think this sentence could be interpreted in a variety of ways.
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58 mins

characterized by my personal emotions

"Sometimes my feedback is characterized by my personal emotions."

Or you could write "by my individual emotions"
Peer comment(s):

agree Jeff Pan : this one felt smoother
11 hrs
Thanks eagle004!
agree Jason Ma
2 days 21 hrs
Thank you Martin!
agree Malcolm Mayfield : I like yours best.
7 days
Thanks Malcolm!
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+1
2 hrs

my feedback is sort of personally emotional

Here "sort of" is a adv.
Peer comment(s):

agree Lu Zou : my feedback is personal
4 hrs
thanks a lot :)
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+1
12 hrs

colored with personal emotion/feeling

Better be translated as "Sometimes, my feedback is colored with personal emotion", or substitute "emotion" with "feeling".
Peer comment(s):

agree Jeff Pan : this one is good too
25 mins
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3 days 14 hrs

personal, personal empotions, reflects personal emotions

1 Sometimes my feedback is a little bit/sort of personal.
2 Sometimes my feedback has something personal/some personal emotions in it.=Sometimes there may be something personal/some personal emotions in my feedback.
3 Sometimes my feedback reflects personal emotions.
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7 days

[...] get in the way

as in: In giving feedback, sometimes my personal feelings..

a. get in the way
b. cloud my judgment
c. affect my judgment
d. influence my decisions
e. etc.
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7 days

[...] get in the way

as in: In giving feedback, sometimes my personal feelings..

a. get in the way
b. cloud my judgment
c. affect my judgment
d. influence my decisions
e. etc.
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