Glossary entry

Russian term or phrase:

Предложение

English translation:

With such a display (exposition) the museum recreates THE atmosphere, in which

Added to glossary by Evgeny Terekhin
Jan 23, 2007 11:31
17 yrs ago
Russian term

Предложение

Russian to English Art/Literary Advertising / Public Relations Museum leaflet
Благодаря им [личным вещам] музей воссоздает атмосферу, в которой Булгаков написал лучшие из своих книг.
Owing to them the museum recreates an atmoshpere, in which Bulgakov wrote his best books.
Правильно ли я перевел предложение или нужно что-либо менять? Спасибо!

Proposed translations

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With such a display (exposition) the museum recreates THE atmosphere, in which

я бы выразился иначе. owing to - здесь, мне кажется, не совсем то, что нужно.
Peer comment(s):

agree Karen Sughyan
5 mins
спасибо, Карен
neutral Alexander Demidov : Keep the article, drop the comma (it's a restrictive clause)
7 hrs
agree Sophia Hundt (X) : Скажите только: This display (or the display) helps to recreate the atmosphere in which Bulgakov wrote some of his best works. Чем меньше слов, тем лучше, я считаю.
1 day 17 hrs
спасибо, София
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Due to them museum creates an atmosphere where Bulgakov wrote one of his best books

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7 hrs

It is the personal effects that make it possible for the museum...

I can't think of any other way to make it look natural in English
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Displaying the writer's belongings enableshelps (the museum) to recreate the atmosphere ..

you can put it this way. And even drop "the museum".

But i would definitely not use "owing to"
Peer comment(s):

agree Tamarai (X) : think this phrase reads the best of all suggestions
4 days
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Thanks to them the museum recreates an atmosphere in which Bulgakov had written his best books

по моему мнению можно использовать термин "thanks to them" потому что данный термин дает возможность читатею понять, благодаря чему можно было создать нужную атмосферу.
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Еще вариант

А вот немного по другому: This display (or the display) helps to recreate the atmosphere in which Bulgakov wrote some of his best works.



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