May 30, 2005 08:51
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Of the moment fashion forward silhouettes
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Designed to embody the latest fashion trends, the XXXX collection is a limited edition seasonal offering of stylish separates for both men and women. Of the moment fashion forward silhouettes with intricate details and fabric treatments categorizes this lifestyle range while incorporating PUMA personality and style into every garment.
IS IT CORRECT?? OR IS PUNCTUATION WRONG?
IS IT CORRECT?? OR IS PUNCTUATION WRONG?
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The very latest, cutting-edge (high-fashion) shapes/styles/silhouettes categorize/highlight ...
silhouettes (pl) .. categorize
of the moment - current/very latest/
fashion forward silhouettes - revolutionary, innovative, new styles/shapes/designs/silhouettes
of the moment - current/very latest/
fashion forward silhouettes - revolutionary, innovative, new styles/shapes/designs/silhouettes
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Nesrin
: A few hyphens would have made it clearer "Of-the-moment fashion-forward"
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Laurens Landkroon
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Anna Maria Augustine (X)
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Gareth McMillan
: Forward looking, even futuristic.........blablabla
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cmwilliams (X)
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Alfa Trans (X)
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Anna Moorby DipTrans
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fashion-forward silhouettes
http://www.google.com/search?hl=es&rls=RNWE,RNWE:2004-38,RNW...
this expression does indeed exist!!
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and then the verb categorize should be in singular, without the s at the end
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Doh!! Of course I mean it should be in plural, without the s
this expression does indeed exist!!
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Note added at 8 mins (2005-05-30 09:00:05 GMT)
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and then the verb categorize should be in singular, without the s at the end
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Note added at 8 mins (2005-05-30 09:00:28 GMT)
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Doh!! Of course I mean it should be in plural, without the s
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Anna Maria Augustine (X)
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Thanks Anna xx
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cmwilliams (X)
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The current fashion with designs for the future
Fashion-forward silhouettes (figures).
It is for now and also for new trends in the fashion world.
It is for now and also for new trends in the fashion world.
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Angela Arnone
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"Hot fashion-forward silhouettes, with intricate details and fabric treatments,
categorize this lifestyle range, while hallmarking every garment with PUMA style amd personality."
As I understand you Cristina, you want a proofing of that sentence?
First of all, "of the moment" can't open your sentence and to be honest, I'd use something with a jargon ring to it like "hot" or "cool" or "hip".
Then the punctuation should be as I've indicated in the rest of the answer, plus a few modifications to word order, verb correction (categorize was singular but needed plural) and a suggestion to replace "incorporating" with "hallmarking".
HTH
Angela
As I understand you Cristina, you want a proofing of that sentence?
First of all, "of the moment" can't open your sentence and to be honest, I'd use something with a jargon ring to it like "hot" or "cool" or "hip".
Then the punctuation should be as I've indicated in the rest of the answer, plus a few modifications to word order, verb correction (categorize was singular but needed plural) and a suggestion to replace "incorporating" with "hallmarking".
HTH
Angela
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Rachel Fell
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Of-the-moment, fashion-forward silhouettes...categorize...range, ...
2 commas help: both "of the moment" and "fashion forward" could be unhyphenated.
c.f. "Website: www.alex-james.co.uk
Details: Of the moment fashion, music and commercial portraiture. Based in London but work all over the U.K, Europe and the States.
Specialities: Advertising - Commercial and Industrial - Fashion - Portrait"
c.f. "Website: www.alex-james.co.uk
Details: Of the moment fashion, music and commercial portraiture. Based in London but work all over the U.K, Europe and the States.
Specialities: Advertising - Commercial and Industrial - Fashion - Portrait"
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