Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Russian term or phrase:
планы формирования, развития и поддержания
English translation:
plans for establishment, development and continued support of
Added to glossary by
Vladimir Stepanov
Sep 22, 2013 13:03
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планы формирования, развития и поддержания...
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Context - training manual on nuclear security culture:
Следует подчеркнуть, что формирование, развитие и поддержание высокого уровня культуры физической безопасности установки или объекта будет успешным только в том случае, когда:
...
- планы формирования, развития и поддержания высокого уровня культуры физической безопасности предусматривают финансовое, кадровое и материально-техническое обеспечение мер, предусмотренных планом.
My working version is
"action plans for the formation, development and maintenance of a strong nuclear security culture"...
Not sure if "maintenance" is the right word here. English-speaking colleagues prefer to use the word "enhancement" in this context, but that's not what is meant in the original...
Need native speaker advice on the whole phrase please, if possible.
Thanks!!
Следует подчеркнуть, что формирование, развитие и поддержание высокого уровня культуры физической безопасности установки или объекта будет успешным только в том случае, когда:
...
- планы формирования, развития и поддержания высокого уровня культуры физической безопасности предусматривают финансовое, кадровое и материально-техническое обеспечение мер, предусмотренных планом.
My working version is
"action plans for the formation, development and maintenance of a strong nuclear security culture"...
Not sure if "maintenance" is the right word here. English-speaking colleagues prefer to use the word "enhancement" in this context, but that's not what is meant in the original...
Need native speaker advice on the whole phrase please, if possible.
Thanks!!
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Proposed translations
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Rachel Douglas
United States
United States
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establishment, development and continued support of
I don't like "maintenance" because, though formally not incorrect, it smacks of sweeping out the premises, tightening screws. etc. "Establishing, developing and maintaining" would be OK, but if the phrase is repeated a few times, it could work better to write with out-and-out nouns.
The combo "development and continued support of" is pretty common.
In the sentence with "планы", I would write "Plans for..."
The combo "development and continued support of" is pretty common.
In the sentence with "планы", I would write "Plans for..."
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Fantastic, thank you very much!"
19 mins
Nadezhda Golubeva
Russian Federation
Russian Federation
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Russian Federation
Experience and Responsibility
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4
plans for establishing, upgrowth and keeping up the high level...
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Peer comment(s):
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Rachel Douglas
: Careful: "upgrowth" is a process of growing (intransitive), rather than a process of making something grow (transitive). Therefore it's not interchangeable with, say, "cultivation."
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Naveen Kar
India
India
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India
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training, development and maintenance plans
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Oleg Lozinskiy
Russian Federation
Russian Federation
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Russian Federation
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80
plans for elaboration, development and updating
В моей практике это было так.
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Note added at 1 час (2013-09-22 15:03:08 GMT)
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...of the nuclear security SYSTEM
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Note added at 1 час (2013-09-22 15:03:08 GMT)
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...of the nuclear security SYSTEM
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Alex Triumfov
Russian Federation
Russian Federation
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Legal and financial translations
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