Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Russian term or phrase:
Революцией в борьбе с возрастом стала
English translation:
Series XXX marked a revolution in the fight against aging (also see reference entry)
Added to glossary by
Amy Lesiewicz
Oct 12, 2015 20:21
8 yrs ago
Russian term
It is never too late to learn
Native in: Russian 
, Latvian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Latvian to Russian, and 3 more.
Революцией в борьбе с возрастом стала
Russian to English
Other
Cosmetics, Beauty
cosmetic product description
Революцией в борьбе с возрастом стала серия XXX, представленная продуктами XXX anti–age для замедления старения кожи и средствами XXX anti–wrinkle для борьбы с морщинами
thanks in advance!
thanks in advance!
Proposed translations
(English)
Change log
Oct 15, 2015 22:43: Amy Lesiewicz Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
+3
3 mins
Amy Lesiewicz
United States
United States
Native in English
United States
the bond between science and language
Native in: English (Variants: US, Australian, Canadian, New Zealand, British, UK, US South)
Works in: Russian to English, English
Related KudoZ points
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20
Selected
Series XXX marked a revolution in the fight against aging
Or
Series XXX constituted an anti-aging revolution...
Series XXX constituted an anti-aging revolution...
Peer comment(s):
| neutral |
Erzsébet Czopyk
: The revolution is OK, I agree. The "fight against" is not. This is a cosmetic product.
12 mins
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| agree |
Donald Jacobson
: anti-aging, yes
1 hr
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| agree |
Jack Doughty
1 hr
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| agree |
fazil
: XXX has marked a revolutionary breakthrough in the fight against aging
11 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you, Amy! "
-1
6 mins
Oleg Lozinskiy
Russian Federation
Russian Federation
Native in Russian
Russian Federation
There's No Limit to Perfection
Native in: Russian 
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, English
A new age in geriatric pharmacology has come with...
"Маркетинговый" ведь текст-то...
Peer comment(s):
| disagree |
Erzsébet Czopyk
: Oh, dear Oleg, if any female see the word "geriatric", we will never buy the cream. We never reach the geriatric age, just our children growing up. every woman is just a bit more that 18. the new age ok, but the geriatric - just forget about it! Only
11 mins
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Many thanks, Erzsébet! You've just reminded me that 'marketing' implies 'transcreation' (for a better pay and pay-off) rather than 'translation'. :-) BUT (there's always a BUT) - I DO insist on the 'NEW AGE' (rather than a simple 'revolution') :-)
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+1
32 mins
Erzsébet Czopyk
Hungary
Hungary
Works in field
Hungary
sworn translator, linguist, DPO
Native in: Hungarian (Variant: Hungary)
Works in: Russian to Hungarian, Hungarian to Russian, Latvian to Russian, and 10 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
4
do not translate literally - it's marketing!
Революцией в борьбе с возрастом стала серия XXX, представленная продуктами XXX anti–age для замедления старения кожи и средствами XXX anti–wrinkle для борьбы с морщинами
Featuring anti-ages products of series XXX - breakthrough in anti-aging revolution to reduce skin aging and anti-wrinkle products XXX that restores flexibility and resiliency to the skin / youthful looking skin /enhances the skin's renewal process / helps your skin maintain maintain a constant moisture level / penetrates quickly to supplement your skin's own moisture-binding capacity / rejuvenates you look / leaving skin smooth and soft / revitalises skin, giving it a luminous glow.
Rejuvenating Cream
For dry or mature skin. A luxuriously non-greasy day or night cream, rich in Aloe Vera, Algae extract and Royal Jelly for the ultimate moisturiser. This cream also improves your skin's mositure-binding capabilities with the hydrating power of Hyaluronic Acid. Panthenol and Allantoin soften and soothe skin minimising the appearance of fine lines.
Do not translate "geriatry" or the words "age", write mature skin, never use the word "old"!
Good luck!
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It's poesy, not translation! :))) And we will happily open our wallets...
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protects the skin from accelerated ageing
provides powerful anti-ageing benefits derived from
, to keep skin looking and feeling youthful by protecting (collagen)
looking smooth and soft, while protecting your skin
to promote luminous skin
Tru Face Skin Perfecting Gel helps maintain skin clarity and minimise the formation of fine lines and wrinkles.
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I copied these phrases for you from the 400-page premium category anti-ageing product catalogue, translated by my office few years ago.
Featuring anti-ages products of series XXX - breakthrough in anti-aging revolution to reduce skin aging and anti-wrinkle products XXX that restores flexibility and resiliency to the skin / youthful looking skin /enhances the skin's renewal process / helps your skin maintain maintain a constant moisture level / penetrates quickly to supplement your skin's own moisture-binding capacity / rejuvenates you look / leaving skin smooth and soft / revitalises skin, giving it a luminous glow.
Rejuvenating Cream
For dry or mature skin. A luxuriously non-greasy day or night cream, rich in Aloe Vera, Algae extract and Royal Jelly for the ultimate moisturiser. This cream also improves your skin's mositure-binding capabilities with the hydrating power of Hyaluronic Acid. Panthenol and Allantoin soften and soothe skin minimising the appearance of fine lines.
Do not translate "geriatry" or the words "age", write mature skin, never use the word "old"!
Good luck!
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Note added at 34 mins (2015-10-12 20:55:32 GMT)
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It's poesy, not translation! :))) And we will happily open our wallets...
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Note added at 37 mins (2015-10-12 20:58:40 GMT)
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protects the skin from accelerated ageing
provides powerful anti-ageing benefits derived from
, to keep skin looking and feeling youthful by protecting (collagen)
looking smooth and soft, while protecting your skin
to promote luminous skin
Tru Face Skin Perfecting Gel helps maintain skin clarity and minimise the formation of fine lines and wrinkles.
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Note added at 38 mins (2015-10-12 21:00:07 GMT)
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I copied these phrases for you from the 400-page premium category anti-ageing product catalogue, translated by my office few years ago.
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Nadezhda Golubeva
7 hrs
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Thank you very much!
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| neutral |
fazil
: in my understanding, a breakthrough might be considered a revolution, or trigger a revolution
10 hrs
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I try to give a useful explanation - the most important the translation shall (in this particular case) serve the interest of the client
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Reference comments
23 hrs
Turdimurod Rakhmanov
Kyrgyzstan
Kyrgyzstan
Kyrgyzstan
Education, Legal, Technical & Medical
Native in: Uzbek (Variants: Samarkand-Bukhara, Khorezm, Tashkent, Ferghana valley) , Kirghiz
Works in: English to Uzbek, English to Kirghiz, English to Kazakh, and 26 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
8
Reference:
Series XXX -Revolutionary Anti-Aging Breakthrough
вариант:
Series XXX is Revolutionary Anti-Aging Breakthrough in...
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Series XXX is a Revolutionary Anti-Aging Breakthrough in...
Series XXX is Revolutionary Anti-Aging Breakthrough in...
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Note added at 23 hrs (2015-10-13 19:40:05 GMT)
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Series XXX is a Revolutionary Anti-Aging Breakthrough in...
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