Feb 22, 2004 07:24
20 yrs ago
English term

sentence

English Art/Literary
as bold as I can, but wincing despite myself. I mount the stairs. How must I look to the world with my dingy shirt and trousers, my bare feet, my unkempt beard? Like a domestic, I pray, as ostler come home after a night's carousing.

Discussion

Gayle Wallimann Feb 22, 2004:
Too many words for Kudoz. Let us help you, tell us what the specific problem is, and if you've given it a go, let's have your ideas too. Thanks!
Fuad Yahya Feb 22, 2004:
What is the question?
Alex Zelkind (X) Feb 22, 2004:
What part of it you don't understand?

Responses

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my take

I tryi to show courage but I am still afraid. I go up the stairs. Other people must think I look odd in my dirty shirt and pants, my bare feet, my rough beard? I look like a house servant, even a stableman who is stumbling home after a night of hard drinking
Peer comment(s):

agree Armorel Young : well put
1 hr
agree Gayle Wallimann : Not bad, although it would be nice if the asker could answer our questions!
8 hrs
agree Gerard Burns Jr.
10 hrs
agree BerylA : A good interpretation of the whole sentence, which is what I assume the asker wanted!
11 hrs
agree EKM
1 day 16 hrs
agree senin
23 days
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks for help. Macky"
9 hrs

Prison

From the word "Sentence", I am assuming one is talking here of coming back from a jail or prison or lockup. And the description of the dirty shirt, pants, rough beard etc. also points to that fact. Probably this is not a modern day prison that is spoken here. The person is trying to be brave, although he is trembling inside due to fear or feeling of insecurity. For he is wondering how the others would react to his appearance, for he looks like a servant or a stableman coming home after a night of heavy drinking and orgy.
The reference to "domestic" who could look like that also makes me believe that it is not from a modern period, same as the prisoner's condition.
Peer comment(s):

neutral BerylA : I think the asker was referring to the meaning of the sentence as a whole!
3 hrs
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