Nikki Scott-Despaigne wrote:
Hello,
I've taken a look at your survey and would like to make one or two suggestions. I've compiled surveys for study/research and so have experience of knowing how important feedback is. Questions must be absolutely clear so that you ask the question you mean to ask and so that respondents will be able to reply with accuracy. Further, as this is a matter of language study, then your English has to be clear.
You may like to consider the following:
- In the first question, “in” appears at the start and the end. You do not need both.
- You ask whether I use the first or the third person, but it is not clear what you mean. What circumstances/situation do you have in mind? Do you mean when addressing the patient?
- When you refer to “measures against psychological impact”, do you mean of the interview on the patient, or of the situation on me as the interpreter?
- When you write “in accordance to the above question”, do you mean “with reference to the above question”?
Thank you for pointing those ambiguities out to me, I appreciate it. I've made some changes that I hope make it clearer as to what information I'm looking for.