Seguir proyectando con entusiasmo el futuro del negocio

19:52 Oct 17, 2019 

Quick suggestion: ...and helps drive the business forward / fuels our plans for the future of the business
Or words to that effect.

19:12 Oct 17, 2019 

the Spanish ST is a little wordy for the context, but then, in my experience, Spanish is traditionally more flowery than English. For this reason, and because floweriness in English writing went out of fashion aeons ago, I would still aim for more concision/precision in the EN text. Above all, avoid making the TT more wordy than the ST. Even if the text is not intended for marketing purposes... I'm not suggesting you should remove anything from the ST, but, in my opinion, the ideas could be conveyed far more economically in both languages without any loss of meaning.

But you haven't told us if this is indeed a marketing text...

18:30 Oct 17, 2019 

How do you all perceive the original Spanish sentence? It it written well, in your opinion?

17:00 Oct 17, 2019 

In particular, what is conveyed by " It is our hope that, in doing so, we will continue to catapult the business"? If you really look at this, with its changes of tense, you'll see that it isn't coherent. And where does "it is our hope that..." come from? It isn't in the ST and simply makes the message sound floppy!

What Phil says is right, but it would take a lot more than merely breaking up the sentences to make the message sound punchy

16:49 Oct 17, 2019 

Any suggestions?
**We have put in hard work and dedication to address every aspect of the project. It is our hope that, in doing so, we will continue to catapult the business into the future.

16:40 Oct 17, 2019 

I think you've stuck too closely to the Spanish in all your suggested translations. You can't get away with long sentences and no punctuation in English. And you're misunderstanding "proyectando", which means "planning".

15:44 Oct 17, 2019 

...if so, you need to tighten the translation considerably

A few no-nos in UK EN:

...a reference which (=> a reference that)
... so that the project is a ...(=> to ensure that the project becomes/to turn the project into/...etc, etc (the choice is endless!))
...to eagerly project: except in Star Trek ("To Boldly Go...") this sounds ungrammatical (in fact, it does anyway!). Unless of course you are using this to make a particular point...!