prende una nuova piega

English translation: XXX takes a new turn and folds it up

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Italian term or phrase:prende una nuova piega
English translation:XXX takes a new turn and folds it up
Entered by: Lisa Jane

07:29 Oct 19, 2017
Italian to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Advertising / Public Relations / slogan
Italian term or phrase: prende una nuova piega
Looking for suggestions for this slogan.
It's for a bike that folds down to the size of hand luggage.
The client would like to keep the idea of "fold" or "folding", but I'm stuck

xxx /name of bike manufacturer / prende una nuova piega

Can we use the double meaning of fold?
Welcome to the fold... but I can't work it into the slogan and include the name.
Alexandra Speirs
Local time: 07:19
XXX takes a new turn and folds it up
Explanation:
As it's a bike I think takes a new turn could fit and then I'd add fold it up .
Take a new turn is very close in meaning to prendere una nuova piega.

You could add another phrasal verb and say

Folds it up and stows it away if it is specifically designed to be taken on public transport.
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Lisa Jane
Italy
Local time: 07:19
Grading comment
I used my own "Welcome to the fold" for the slogan, but I used this one in the explanation that followed!
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Summary of answers provided
4XXX breaking ground: fold it & stash it
Alison Kennedy
4XXX takes a new turn and folds it up
Lisa Jane
4makes/takes a bold fold
cc15texas (X)
3XXX takes a new tuck / gets into a new fold
Michael Korovkin


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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
XXX takes a new tuck / gets into a new fold


Explanation:
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Michael Korovkin
Italy
Local time: 07:19
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in RussianRussian
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks!

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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
XXX breaking ground: fold it & stash it


Explanation:
I don't know who suggested that this is non-proz but slogan writing is one of the hardest things in copywriting!
"prendere una nuova piega" means taking a new turn or direction but just look at a few successful slogans used like:
Daz (Dash): "Whiter than white" to "Più bianco non si può".
This is just an attempt to keep the "fold" theme. You don't say whether the bike folds down to carried on as hand luggage or folds down to be stashed in a back-pack. You coud probably work around the theme of "folding it and stashing it".
Alison

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Note added at 3 hrs (2017-10-19 11:18:15 GMT)
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I forgot to add: always send several creative sloutions to client for the slogan - it shows you think creative and don't just translate, plus they really like being able to choose!

Alison Kennedy
Italy
Local time: 07:19
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 36
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks! It doesn't go in a back-pack ...

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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
XXX takes a new turn and folds it up


Explanation:
As it's a bike I think takes a new turn could fit and then I'd add fold it up .
Take a new turn is very close in meaning to prendere una nuova piega.

You could add another phrasal verb and say

Folds it up and stows it away if it is specifically designed to be taken on public transport.

Lisa Jane
Italy
Local time: 07:19
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in ItalianItalian
PRO pts in category: 24
Grading comment
I used my own "Welcome to the fold" for the slogan, but I used this one in the explanation that followed!
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks!

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8 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
makes/takes a bold fold


Explanation:
makes a bold fold

brainstorming some other ideas:

puts a (new) flex in its step

puts a pleat in its seat -
this one would refer to the bicycle seat, but I don't know how the bike "folds" in half - not having a better description.



cc15texas (X)
United States
Local time: 00:19
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in ItalianItalian, Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks! It has a "snodo centrale" but I don't have a picture

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